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Marketing Copy - Words That Attract Clients and Increase Sales

by Charlie Cook
©2005 In Mind Communications, LLC, all rights reserved.

Whether it's your business card, tagline, article title, web site title and description or ad, just the difference of a few words can either pull in prospects and clients or push them away. Effective marketing copy can determine whether your phone is ringing off the hook or you are twiddling your thumbs hoping someone will call.

Just by changing a word or two or combining a couple of phrases, you can increase your response rate dramatically. Book publishers know that a book's title can make the difference between it becoming a best seller or a loser. Wouldn't you like your service and products to be best sellers?

In the past if you wanted to be sure you'd found the best name for your business or the right phrases to use in your small business marketing materials, you needed to hire a marketing research firm to get a reliable answer. Using phone surveys and focus groups, a market research firm can tell you which names turn prospects off and which make people want to buy your services and products.

Learn how to find the right words to explain exactly how you help prospects. With a brilliant marketing message you’ll attract more clients right away. Use the ’15 Second Marketing’ guide to create more business opportunities.

While business marketing research firms may still be the best answer for mid to large businesses, most independent professionals and small business owners, don't budget tens of thousands of dollars for this type of in-depth analysis. So how do you find out which key words and phrases will attract clients to you?

You can research and test words and phrases to dramatically increase the response to your marketing. Thanks to the development of the internet and a couple of free and almost free online tools you can easily research which words pull in prospects and which push them away. Use the steps outlined below, to refine the words you use in your small businesss marketing strategy.

Start With A Focus On Client's Problems
Don't make the mistake of using marketing copy that focuses on your name, professional label, your credentials or processes. Your prospects are concerned about their own problems, issues and needs. For example, the phrase "back pain" is searched for on the internet one and a half times as often as "chiropractor".

If you're a chiropractor, your marketing materials should focus on the pain that your clients' experience. Start with words that focus on prospects' problems. If you can't think of any, use words that describe the solution to their problems. What problems and solutions are your clients looking for?

Learn how to find the right words to explain exactly how you help prospects. With a brilliant elevator speech and marketing message you’ll attract more clients right away. Use the ’15 Second Marketing’ guide to create more business opportunities.

Use Attention Getting Words
Everyone knows that certain words like "sex" attract attention. The problem is "sex" won't attract clients for 99.9% of small businesses. It's not going to help a lawyer, cleaning service, caterer, etc. Other words that get attention are how to, secrets, and free. The title of this
article contains at least two attention-getting words. Can you identify them?

Fish Where the Fish Are
Certain category phrases exist to describe most types of businesses or tasks. If you are a web designer, the phrase " web design" is one. If you sell pyrotechnics, the more commonly used term is "fireworks"; by a factor of twenty-two. Improve the response to your marketing by using the common phrases people use to search online, the same ones
used commonly in association with the services and products you sell.

Overture and Wordtracker provide free online tools to help you find the words and phrases your prospects are interested in. Make a list of all the words and phrases you think people associate with your services whether or not have a web site. Then test each phrase to find out which words attract the most attention.

The easiest tool to test word or phrase popularity is Overture's
at inventory.overture.com/d/searchinventory/suggestion/
Type in possibilities from your list and look at how many times it was used in a search in the last month. Write the number down next to the word or phrase on your list and continue testing until you have a clear winner. Make sure the keywords you use to describe yourself, and the ones you use on your web pages to help the search engines find your site are ones your prospects use, too.

Almost Free Market Research
Once you know the category phrase that best describes your services and products, the next step is to develop your tagline, or the copy you use in your web site description or even yellow page advertising copy. If you are a lawyer you might have a listing in the yellow pages under
attorneys, but what should you say to prompt people to call your office? Do you know which of the following phrases is most likely to pull in prospects?

- Free consultation for serious injuries
- Need legal help?
- Find the right attorney
- Maximum cash compensation

Without doing some market research you won't know which phrase, if any of these, is the most effective. Thanks to www.Google.com/adwords it's easy to test out your ideas. Depending on the popularity of your key words and how long you run your test, it will cost twenty to fifty dollars or more at Google. You can sign-up, put up as many variations of your ad as you want, and see which ones
people respond to.

You may be surprised that changing a word or two can increase your response by factors of five or more. Once you see which phrases are working, try combining them to improve your response even more.

Even if you never run an ad, researching which phrases pull in prospects can help your business grow. Use the results on your business card, in your tagline, as the title to your web site or as the title to an article and pull in many more clients and customers.

Learn how to find the right words to explain exactly how you help prospects. With a brilliant marketing message you’ll attract more clients right away. Use the ’15 Second Marketing’ guide to create more business opportunities.